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timelessness of it all

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I feel so lost


for me, time has stopped…

and I can’t figure out how
everyone else goes about their days…



because I’m stuck




and I feel like I have to
remind myself to breath

or else I’d forget the time

and place I’m still in


instead of the moment



frozen in my mind.


time has stopped




but the world moves on.


I’m stuck in a place
that only I know…

and that others can’t relate.




if only time had stopped

for everyone

then I wouldn’t feel so


lost…



confused…







alone


in the timelessness of it all
Lost, confused, and alone


in the timelessness of it all
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hollyberrie14's avatar
this is a wonderful expression of a horrible feeling. i can definitely relate. great use of space. especially on the word alone.